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Out-worn heart in a time out-worn,
Come clear of the nets of wrong and right;
Laugh, heart, again in the grey twilight,
Sigh, heart, again in the dew of the morn.

—W. B. Yeats, “Into The Twilight”

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    Moon’s Up, Nights Up (Part 1)

by Quin Browne

Eloise McDaniels had spent most of her life avoiding sleep.

As a baby, she was one of those spoken about in hushed whispers by other mothers around coffee and Sara Lee pound cakes; “Oh, poor Peggy [for that was her mother’s name]! That baby hasn’t slept since they brought her home from the hospital! I mean, have you seen her lately?” The last pronouncement brought tsk’s and a general shaking of heads….the name recalling a memory of the missing member of the coffee klatch. The sallow complexion and bag-laden eyes along with her worn-thin-by-exhaustion body was vivid in their minds. Each mother smiled, an unconscious smile of smug superiority. Their babies slept with a normal pattern, only waking on occasion to be changed and fed. As the months had wore on, these children held to that sleep cycle for longer and longer periods, allowing the whole family to sleep with them, barely stirring when their cry rang out in the dark. Once the need for food and comfort were met, they swiftly nestled back to sleep, as babies are wont to do.

Eloise McDaniels did no such thing.

She fussed and fidgeted and moaned from the moment she was born. Her wails would bring her mother to the nursery, where she would feed and change Eloise, offering comfort when she snuggled her close, watching Eloise’s eyes grow heavy and then close. This child, however, was a master of playing possum; lying with eyes shut and soft breath whispering between her pursed baby lips, the very picture of a sound sleep. She held to this pretense of full sleep during her mother’s s l o w rising from the rocking-chair, the tiptoeing to the crib, the lying Eloise on her back and a gentle lifting of a blanket to cover her in the night. Peggy would creep down the hallway, praying to herself and whoever could be listening, “Pleasepleasepleaseplease.” Back in her own room, Peggy’s hearing was tuned to the baby monitor sitting innocently on her nightstand. She’d eventually allow her guard to drop, lulled into complacency by the quiet, gentle breathing pattern broadcast between the tiny bursts of static–wanting, hoping, believing tonight would be the night of blissful rest. It was always a waiting game, between Eloise and Peggy…. how deep of a sleep could Peggy fall into before Eloise decided it was enough, before she opened her clear green eyes to the dark, before she gave a wiggle of anticipated joy, and quite deliberately opened her mouth to call her mother back into the little room with the small night light, where she would soothe, change, feed, rock, curse, cry, beg Eloise to just go back to sleep, for the love of God, go back to sleep!

And sometimes, sometimes….Peggy thought seriously about letting Eloise remain tangled in the blankets, little arms flailing, her tiny twisting body causing the soft cotton blanket to become stuffed in her wee nose….she thought about turning off the monitor just long enough to….to….Peggy would shake the thought from her head, from her confused imagination, and go back to untangle her ‘bundle of joy’, once again changing, feeding and rocking, singing the lullaby she’d composed for her child, “Shut up, shut up, little girl. Don’t you cry. Shut up, shut up, little girl. Close. Your fucking. Eyes.”

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he imagines

the monster is anyone
and everyone he imagines himself
to be

not just you
or me
or even a multitude of strangers

but a monster

—offbeatjim

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Trapped in Pavement

He thrusts the balloons into her hand like swollen kisses, but already she is running. She dashes, feet aching. She wants only to feel lighter; balloons aloft like an incantation. Her body is trilling with feeling. No feeling, no feeling. The thought spirals, rotates: a mantra.
Somewhere she trips on cement pathway and her shoes fall from her. She just keeps running. Her grip tightens around balloon string and she tosses herself down onto a slatted bench before her. The balloons are her buoy, she is going under.
She can feel clouds in the air, looming like they’re going to ingest her. She thrusts her nails into her mouth to push down words-bubbling. Her eyes are fixed on some intangible horizon. She is not looking anywhere.

—Roberta Lawson

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Soul Food

To get me is to have me
To have me is to consume me
To consume me is to take me into your soul
To take me into your soul is to sacrifice your own
To sacrifice your own soul means replacing it with mine
But replacing your soul with mine means you are no longer you
Instead, you will be a mirror image, a pawn, for I have a black heart
and you will, too

—Allie Dresser

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Damn it Feels Good to be a Gangsta
By Janelle Rene

Much like any other single female in today’s contemporary life, I was poised to finish a Lean Cuisine and retire to the couch for an evening of Law & Order. Or not! Instead, I had my clipboard in hand and was ready and standing at one of the hottest of the hotspots. I was at the biggest “at the moment” trendy nightclub amongst the glistening lights, and equally glittery starlets in Hollywood.

Just like in the days of Studio 54, I was part of the door crew, the elusive doormen that may or may not let you in based on your appearance or how much you were willing to grease us to guide you to the front of the line. I was more threatening a foe than the over 6′ plus two-hundred fifty pound dudes standing around me. Why? Because I held “the list.” Yes, “the list” that you were either on or you were not. I guarded this list with my life, and I was heavily guarded by the aforementioned muscle.

Standing at just barely 5’ 3”, for years I was always told I cast a slight presence. I used to think this was a flattering reference to my small frame. At some point, though, I realized this compliment wasn’t so flattering, a suggestion that perhaps I was barely noticeable at all. I didn’t set out to be “noticed” per se, but evidently as the years went on, my shyness gave way to unabashed ballsiness.

To be known in Hollywood at all is a feat in itself. Everyone is struggling to be seen, to be noticed, to be discovered, and at the club door, they were struggling to be seen by me. I was known through Hollywood as “The Sergeant” as I would stand at the door quietly, before projecting in my loud booming voice “$20 to join us, $0 to go home!” They were all so threatened by my presence, but wouldn’t they laugh to know that was just my “cheerleader voice”.

Thousands of people would cram into the parking lot at the entrance to da’ club, trying to look their prettiest, trying to be the coolest, trying to catch a glimpse of a celebrity, and all in vain attempts to get inside. The VIPs were escorted in immediately, because, while they appeared to be special, they were really just people that were stupid enough to pay $800 for a $40 bottle of Vodka. There were the actual celebrities and the ones that played an extra once on Mad Men and thus considered themselves celebrities. There were an actual slew of “regulars”, those that actually formed a bond with you from door-to-door, club to club. There were club promoters, and sub-club promoters, and sub-sub club promoters, all trying to get their people in, or people purportedly on “the list”.

But ballsy as I was, this particular night I was just annoyed. Annoyed at you and your entourage, annoyed that my feet hurt, annoyed that promoters were yelling at me, annoyed at the entire evening! I wished I was home, perhaps curled up on my couch watching Law & Order. I listened to your pleas. I listened to your whining. I took your money and then guided you towards the cashier to pay the mandatory $20 cover charge.

And then she walked up, let’s call her “Amy,” seems appropriate since I didn’t care to know her name then, nor care to now. “Amy” was accompanied by her friends, a few other girls in tacky Forever 21 dresses, carrying knock-off designer handbags, and wearing $200 shoes. They had probably spent their entire day at the local mall shopping for their ensembles, all leading up to this amazing, fantastic unforgettable evening. “Amy” and the gang made it through the velvet rope and they were primed and ready for their grand entrance. She walked up to one of my bodyguards to charm herself into the club. I asked her, as I asked everyone else, whose list she was on? She ignored me. I asked again, “Whose list are you on?” “Amy” looked at me and said “Who the fuck do you think you are?” Who am I?! “I’m the reason you’ll be getting into this establishment tonight or not,” I replied in a polite yet sardonic tone. Perhaps to be expected, “Amy” told me to “fuck off” and continued to flirt with my bodyguard. All the annoyances of the evening caught up to me in a flash and I lost my cool. I cocked my arm back and I clocked this chick square in the jaw. She stumbled back, completely stunned, then lunged at me. Her friends quickly followed into the fray, as my bodyguards swooped in. A group of screaming, kicking, girls in Forever 21 dresses were forcibly escorted off the property. They were yelling obscenities, they were threatening law suits. But one thing was sure: they were not inside the trendy Hollywood hotspot, they were out on the street.

I barely knew what had happened at all. My stature forever changed, I was no longer cutting such a slight presence. From then on my bodyguards referred to me as a thug, fist bumping me with respect. I smiled slyly to myself, for the best part was that nobody was ever on “the list”, not a single name, just blank sheets of paper hidden by a top sheet, my body, and my clipboard. Damn it feels good to be a gangsta.

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All photography in this issue by Paul Dutra.

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Read SPECIAL #1: Kristen Michelle Håvet HERE

ISSUE #2 coming November 15, 2009.

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38 Comments

  1. Thank you for including my short poem. The entire issue was a pleasure to read. Every piece was done well, and I also enjoyed the pictures.

    • @Jim….Short on words, big on impact. Your poem is one of the things that inspired me to create this magazine.

        • Jim Wittenberg
        • Posted October 17, 2009 at 9:58 am
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        Wow. High praise, indeed. It was an obscure poem of mine that I jotted down in my blog a couple years back. For awhile I even thought of deleting all of my posts because they never got any hits. Your magazine has received more positive comments than a lot of those I’ve viewed on the web.

  2. Everything works together here. I look forward to the upcoming issues and more of this clear-thinking writing. Each piece, prose and poems alike, had something to say with which I could identify. Much luck in this endeavor.

  3. Nice look/feel/literary two-step! I’ll definately be back for more.

  4. this was a brilliant first issue. Quin’s story ROCKED! (the cradle)

    The photography is amazing. The black & white one that looks like the ocean against drift wood has me mesmerized–i’d love the print.

    Thanks for the interesting reads.

    • @Peggy….That’s the photographer’s dog. I thought it was crashing surf for months. I’ve let him know about your interest in the print.

  5. so far I love this. it’s right up my alley, and quin did an amazing job as did allie. I’m going to be submitting alot of posts to you, hope you like them enough to include now and again.

  6. Quin!
    Rock a bye baby on the tree top….lovely, but I missed your blade-in-the brain writing,that diamond edge…

    You reassured me with the first line. I thought the mother would have sought deep sleep by the end of the first year- so she lived …

    Or did she?

  7. A beautiful collection.

  8. I enjoyed this first issue very much. The stories rang true and the poetry was good. I loved the photographs. I’m looking forward to the next one and would like to be on a mailing list, if that is possible.

    • Never occured to me. I’ll try to set one up. Thanks for the kind words and for bringing that to my attention.

  9. A great issue! I enjoyed reading each piece and have to say that the writing and photography both are fan-freaking-tastic! This is definately going on the favorite’s tab.

  10. Great debut writes. Super clean look, feel, tude. Grand stuff.

  11. Hey Janelle, I thought the doorman always rings twice?
    Q, as usual, excellent descriptive reality.

    Allie; Very Poe-like. You got me.

    • That’s the Postman.

      Janelle has been thinking of ways to top this, so, if you’re out clubbing in Hollywood, don’t start any shit with a 5’3″ brunette who kind of reminds you of Natalie Wood….

    • Angela Bobbie Young
    • Posted October 15, 2009 at 11:20 am
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    I love it already! Can’t wait for the next issue!

  12. Your magazine is a feast for the eyes and for the soul. Quin, I can hardly wait for Chapter 2.

  13. Walter! Grand curtain-rising on a clean classy new joint to come’round to. For those likewise creative spunks, Lynn, Paul and the Allie ~ real nice zing to the zine.

    ALLIE ~ The pawn and black heart in such a visually presented expression faved this one. So “served with a twist” as you, at any decent drink-it-in joint.

    PAUL ~ Photograhpy a sensation of itself. One pauses and feels the moment. Orange quaking aspen (?) speak.

    JANELLE ~ Gangsta suits you like a surprise punch to the gut. Will be following where your clipboard carries blank sheets, for you fill them in well.

    ROBERTA ~ From mantra to intangible horizon, a full tale in a tight take. You had me with “balloons as swollen kisses”.

    OffBeatJim ~ Monster over multitudes – dead on, offbeat.

    WALTER – You really got that mug in Groton? CHEERS on the next *clink* from this Connecticut Yankee in King Conley’s court. ~ Absolutely*Kate

    • @Kate….Get on I-95. Cross the bridge into Groton. First exit and stay to the right, like your heading back down to the river. Norm’s is on the left-hand side. Best kielbasa omelet I’ve ever had.

  14. I loved this entire issue and have subscribed in my reader. Can’t wait for November 15th!
    Quin, I will be watching for part 2!

  15. wow.

    thank you to everyone who read, and an even bigger thanks to those who took the time to comment on the joint effort here..

    huge kudos to walter, who not only came up with the concept for this great place, but, for being the swell guy he is… i’m forever grateful he asked me to join these amazingly talented artists.

  16. Great maiden issue. I loved every submission.

  17. Impressive photography, Paul. Stunning in every sense of the word.

    Nice dark walk to the edge, Quin. Peggy or Devil Baby, which one will end up bust open on the rocks below?

    What better for a monster to be? Had my lazy brain thinking, Jim, always a good thing.

    Delicious surreality (new word), Roberta. Made me venture to and become trapped in Atmospheres of Perfect Silence, which was finer than fine.

    I’m another of your kind, Allie. Or maybe you got me, too.

    It is indeed good, Janelle. Loved the whole Amy scene. Cheap Forever 21 clothes, but the shoes, yeah, ya gotta spring for the kick-ass heels.

    Great writers, great first issue, Walter : )

  18. Hey, what a quality place!
    Great visuals, great words, so grateful I’ve found you.
    Hats off to Walter.

  19. This is such a class act. A great venture Walter. All works together brilliantly. I’m a fan.

  20. Thanks to everyone who took the time to check us out. The comments are greatly appreciated. Issue #2 is currently growing in a different, even darker room of the mansion….

  21. Love the photos, love the words. What more can you ask. Great site. Will be keeping a close eye on this place…

  22. re: Moon’s Up…The mother and other mothers think in absolutes–the child never sleeps. Will Eloise live a difficult life? The tension passing from Peggy to the baby will further cement that inabiltiy to sleep. If she does sleep, then what will emerge in Peggy, if she does not have the baby to react against? A sweet loving woman or more irritation. Quin has established the favored character and the darker one quickly.
    Well done.

    • lenavanelslander
    • Posted October 19, 2009 at 10:47 am
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    Looks great, reads great … looking forward to more!

  23. Your magazine has an intellectual punch. Refreshing. The photographs are especially striking. Quin’s story is perceptive. I’ll be back to read more when I have quiet and time to enjoy.

  24. I’m so pleased to be a part of the maiden voyage…I’m feeling so, I dunno, disenthralled (ish) (esque)…actually I think this is great…it’s beautifully presented, all the contributors were so perfectly spliced and then melded together with Pauls’ lovely photos! Carry on Walter!

  25. Really wonderful! Love the text and photography. Congratulations.

  26. Another great Quin story. She is a wonderful writer and her stories are always a pleasure (even if dark) as they are well-written and one never knows where it’s going to end. Excellent.

  27. Catching up, in fashionably late fashion. Like a good wine, delicious from first sip to last swallow. I’m a qb fan anyway, and I loved the Secret of The List. Thanks for the fine reads.

  28. Wow.

    Wow.

    Wow.

    I’m speechless.

    Really quality stuff here.

    Makes me feel like a first-grader.


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